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Miedo
MiedoLv41mth
2024-09-21 18:35

This one is very original (that betrayer system) and overall the characters act roughly how they should so this fic while it shakes canon greatly is very good The true only Bad thing here is the translation/grammar Its pretty readable most of the times but when something is off its off Hard, as an little example some expressions like Laozi or huangquang i had to look up online to see what was that refering That and sometimes characters either swap in conversations or are missnamed (i found a xiaohe it was kinda hilarious tho) Overall very good read tbh

One piece CP0 with betraying system

Fanficbeelze
4.6
121 Chs

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SAHIL_8253
SAHIL_8253Lv2

First the mistakes in translation and the Chinese elements, in one hapter MC calls kidao aunt kaido and this my personal opinion if anyone likes it then they are good but i don't like it personally

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ShadowAssassin1
ShadowAssassin1Lv1

PLEASE MORE I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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_Artemis69
_Artemis69Lv4

Another great and fresh concept with bad execution, this have a lot of potential but wasted. What am I expect from mtl 😮‍💨-------------------------------------------------------------------

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vampireking11
vampireking11Lv1

Its great, one of the best fanfics imp. The translting is lacking in some aspects, nothing to bad or anything that will ruin the experience but some terms appear that is not well translated like aunt, or lozai but few.

1mth
kingofdarkness2355
kingofdarkness2355Lv1

Great, Its really original and well written, the story makes sense and is well throughout.... actions and reactiosn also make perfect sense,

1mth
Phantom12548
Phantom12548Lv1

Love it [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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Fanficbeelze
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Shamless review of Author here, If you have any questions please dropt it below and i shall do my best to answer [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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Darkphoenix11
Darkphoenix11Lv1

I love how the story progresses and the MC, This is one of my most favorite One piece fan fictions i have come bout [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

1mth
DaoistZ1Gb96
DaoistZ1Gb96Lv1

This is one of the most original fanfic i seen, takes place 10 years before canon, MC is strong, intelligent and manipulative. He works all sides and benefits the most

1mth
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