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2024-09-07 06:07

the story is good but the execution of it bad. inconsistent, weak, pathetic mc with a brain of a 1 year old and forced relationship with a girl who let another guy touch her

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I understand the other problem as even I am frustrated by them, but "let another guy touch her." bro, when since did the face deliberately let herself be 'touched'

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