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This novel deserved to be report and remove out of Webnovel. The character in here is dumb including tony stark. The mc was also stupid. it's not worth reading this just find some random fanfiction to read.

it reads like a tml I can see that there was a lot of correction but I'm pretty sure there a story that is one for one like this only it's was first in English and the system was different along with the powers and the Mc name In my option it's not good

Tbh i would say since ur only 15 chaps in go bak n reread ur chapters and fix the gender situation

você vai mudar algumas coisas nessa história? lembro de acompanhar ela por outro tradutor, porém eu lembro apenas a trama básica. espero que você consiga tirar os bagulho de chinês...

one of the best read fanfiction I seen good story can't wait for more

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My opinion of this story might or might not mean much. But I think that it deserves respect for the fact that the storyline is better than some other system stories.

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