i started off loving this novel. it's a decent spin on a harem novel where the MC starts OP and navigates his way through Xanxia. The grammar is the Achilles heel for this novel as with most webnovels. I read through the first 50 chapters and while i liked what each character brought to the story, the grammar derails the build up of scenes while you mentally replace what the word should have been. having said that, author you have an Amazon worthy book if you can find a decent editor.
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LIKEI honestly love that for you, let me know when the edits come through because world building and character design are all 5 stars
GodOfLust:Thanks for reading and giving the review. As for the grammar part, I've actually just bought grammarly premium and will edit all chapters of the novel. Hope that helps.