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FlowersNou
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2024-08-07 10:44

loving the novel so far. cant wait for more.

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William_Tex
William_TexLv15

Hello fellow reader's, I am here to give my honest review on this novel. I have read through chapter 83. I will say the story is pretty solid and pacing is overall not to fast and not to slow. I will say I would like longer chapters then short one. Some of the chapter are short and some are long. Some short chapter should be combined since it feels like they would be a whole chapter in a actual book form mate. I do like the way he does when people are talking like it a script but i would like him to add where who says what. Even though you can tell who saying what. I say that do to if someone took a break from series and or someone not used to the style of writing. I personally think overall this a great read just need some grammar and story writing adjusting in the way it written. I do like how he/she tells who eye's we are looking threw the story. As i said in the comments it feels like there no need for the harem for a long time due to the fact this just starting out and Zed and Christina haven't even held hands or kissed to my memory. I like there progress and banter they feel towards each other. Since they are both experiencing love for the first time. I would rather Zed and Christina just the two but I understand not everyone like single female leads. If i am being honest I could see Zed having one or two more partner that Christina would allow. Since this is sent in a medieval style of area and that seems like a couple of new females leads have shown up. But that probably down the road. Overall this book has just started and hope it does well. Hope this review helps the writer getting better. I can only give idea and suggestion but overall you are the artist as they say. But anyway I cannot wait to see how he becomes a villain with Christina being a villainous. It seems like he will be labelled a Villain to the current world then being a actual villain overall. Cannot wait :)

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