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Seiya_ryu
Seiya_ryuLv45mth
2024-06-04 11:26

looks great but that Martial arts system was something else brother

MMORPG: Rebirth of the Mortal Online

Alekzi
4.4
322 Chs

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Meeexs
MeeexsLv14

Yeah I wish the author would continue martial arts system it was such a good book 😢

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Meeexs
MeeexsLv14

I really hope the author can find some motivation to continue the novel

Meeexs:Yeah I wish the author would continue martial arts system it was such a good book 😢
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Skyler_Johnson
Skyler_JohnsonLv1

I agree martial arts system was an amazing style it was much better than most system novels which are bland with only stats but it had much more pizazz I really hope you find the motivation to continue with martial arts system I will wait with baited breath until you find your groove in it again good luck brother and keep up the good work

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Inchine
InchineLv13

The premise is good and the author always makes good works but I would like to know if Martial Online is on hiatus or has been dropped because I don't know if this will happen with this work too

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Michael_Mitchel
Michael_MitchelLv11

was originally good, but unfortunately, it's becoming a harem(the most annoying kind at that). if you don't mind that, you will enjoy this novel, but this is where peace out ✌️ (ch 230ish). ps, please add harem to the tags or something, it's a dealbreaker to many

1mth
Alekzi
AlekziAuthor

I have done video game relates novels before, but this one will be quite different. I am quite excited to continue writing this, and I hope you all will enjoy it.

4mth
Ken_Lamoste
Ken_LamosteLv4

Babe, Wake the author of White online has just dropped a new Banger! . memes aside, the premise of the story is promising with a revenge story motivation I just hope that this will be executed well.

5mth
Shankss
ShankssLv4

the first hundred chapters were good, then it got kinda bad. Idk if it's me but compared to the author's other work, this was a massive downgrade at least in terms of characters and story progression. I feel that characters got their IQ nerfed to the ground and lots of things happen for dumb reasons. The only good thing about this novel is perhaps the world building and the MC, the rest is so-so at least for me.

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AbandonedToGodhood
AbandonedToGodhoodLv14

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David_Pearce_7916
David_Pearce_7916Lv12

If your gonna trust any review trust this one. The grammar is simply atrocius . Might just be a bad translation , but im 20 chapters in and my brain hurts. The pacing is also horrendous. All that said i will read to at least chapter 100 in respect to all my fellow weebs reviews who at this moment seem misguided. Will update

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TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv6

Been a while since I wrote a review. this book compelled me to coz, it's fckng fantastic. it's up there with the legends of vmmrpg ROTSSG. it a pity if you haven't tried this book yet try it now.

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Blanket
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