waiting for comments and stones....

1 he tells Roxy he is a reincarnated person 2 Roxy gets a system too I you like that then this story isn’t bad

Everything was good until the last chap, i.e. 36. The author didn't say he ended it, but with the way chapter 36 was written, it leaves no room for further development. The ending is frankly atrocious. It's like you were given a menu listing various delicacies, and everyone around you seems to be enjoying their food. Everything tasted great until you noticed a clump of hair in your last bite. And then, thinking back, you forgot to order appetizers or side dishes. There are so many characters who have not even been introduced, and their new stories remain unexplored. Good idea, decent execution, horrible ending. Grammar and layout are also below average.

It's so amazing Tldr - Long chapters - well written chapters - the MCs personality comes off as slightly flat at times, and the narrative still can sometimes feel emotionally dull (but don't get me wrong, the fact that I can even recognise these traits should tell you how good this is) - system fic, so naturally it gets op but it's still entertaining - technically there is lolicon and shotacon, but the reason why these are socially bad is because of grooming and mental age (he's a reincarnator so it's a moot point) - he can talk to the waifus/wives so less drama in that regard (if you read the OG light novel, you'll understand 🙄) - MC is not as lecherous as the Of redeus but he is still a good MC to follow along 9/10 toots

Even though the fic has some questionable scenes, it starts off pretty well. The system aspect is a bit confusing and not very straightforward. I'm also unsure if I'll like the harem style the author is aiming for with Rudeus. But overall, it's an above-average read.

It was good at first, but the ending was unbelievably lazy and ruined the rest for me.

Me encanta ,lo único que me molestó hasta ahora fue que perdieron su virginidad demasiado joven pero por todo lo demás está increíble el fic🫠

So far so good! The story so far has been very engaging and I'm very happy that the grammar in this story isn't giving me an aneurysm] Hopefully the author keeps up the good work 😁

Loving the development of the novel right now. I like your way of writing, and thanks for the long chapters. Continue doing what your doing.