5 stars from me, Story is going great, the characters are portrayed perfectly, The Mc is a little simpy, might be because of authors love for maki, nothing wrong with that though. Great fic till now, wishing you the best of luck 🤞

Ok so in my opinion the charectar is cool and I see what your trying to do while you build up his arrogant charectar. My only issue is that from what I’ve read so far which isn’t the whole thing the story is more focused on love than anything else. If that’s your aim then my bad I’ll delete the review and j find a diff book. But overall very good novel

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author has a talent for writing but if you're looking for the action packed jjk this isnt it, this is legit just a romance novel between mc and maki and its like a anime romance where the mc says or does something and maki just hurts him in return. its an alright story but very little stuff other then romance oh and also this -- "I like strong, determined women. The kind who always keep me in line." mc seems to like being a sub in the relationship. so if that isnt a thing you like just skip cus it get baaad

Honestly, a great fic that deserves attention and recognition. Fleshed out OC's and well written character's that dont get much screentime. A great MC that integrates rather easily into the setting and doesn't feel forced. Good cursed techniques, good character development and a great character growth strenth/personality wise. Great fic, 100% recommend If you like a well written story, and/or if you like JJK.

I like the story verymuch good character development great story progression My only problem that sometimes I felt that the writing is a bit Cringy and made wanna throw up in some occasions Other this the story is PERFECT

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Honestly deserves 5 stars just for that good summary

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