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I suggest a rewrite. IMO the pacing of the story is a complete and utter mess, you didn't even give the readers time to get engaged in the story and suddenly the MC who was already born at a bad time made it even worse for himself, assuming he won't go back to the past again, if does then anything he does in the apocalyptic timeline doesn't hold any significance because then he can just overwrite it by going back to past and prevent the snapping in the first place...
Reincarnated as Gojo Satoru in MCU
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That's just it. Every MC never know the significance of their powers, and always use it for granted. I want to show the MC, what he can do. And how he can change people's lives. I know, I am talking as a selfless guy who preaches 'Great power, comes Great Responsibility' kind of cliché. But just imagine. I mean just imagine, you were the MC (Oh, and the MC was orphan in previous live. I guess I forgot to write that), and you just got born and a month later, Your biological parents just turn into dust right in front of ypu. What would you feel? Now, tell me, if I gave some nice, cliché origin, like the other authors, would the MC would ever feel the same thing my MC is feeling. Anyways, Thanks for the review.