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DubanChelo
DubanCheloLv16mth
2024-04-20 12:38

First of all, I love your book. Although it was difficult to read the first chapters, but that's normal. All readers like to see how a protagonist goes from being weak to powerful, although most writers make that change of power very quickly or have them face very weak enemies so that we do not notice their weakness. Getting back to the topic, even if English is not your language you write very well. The world, the plot and the protagonist are good, although if you are going to make the harem story you have to have only one or two couples per world. I'm not going to talk about your update stability because I just read all the chapters straight. Well, without anything else to say, I hope you continue with this wonderful story you started, don't let it die and don't fall for stupid comments from stupid people. I will continue reading your story and encouraging you. Good luck 🍀🍀🍀

The isekai life is not for me - I walk through the Omniverse

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The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

Honestly, there are points in this story that are good, but the negative points take away any possible shine. Firstly, the protagonist has no personality, where is the trait of stubbornness or pride that made him refuse to be entertainment for a God when he became a servant? Another thing is its childishness and stupidity, added to the lack of depth, makes this story bad.

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InterPlanarGod
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ughhh, i just read 18 chapters of almost-intolerable gag. he doesn't even try to escape until chapter 13 despite the synopsis making it sound like he resists first chance he gets. I LOVE the fact that he resists the FOZ world. I HATE the fact that it takes him so long and his cheat is basically garbage tier without magic knowledge.

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DaoistY64dME
DaoistY64dMELv1

beta mc .

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Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv10

please put naruto shippuden world........................................please put naruto shippuden world........................................please put naruto shippuden world........................................please put naruto shippuden world........................................

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ANelite
ANeliteLv3

In just a couple of early chapters the MC becomes slave on top of that he has no personality, so 2 star it is. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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flash_mi
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The story improves in chapter 10. Although it is a little slow... I like it..👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌..........................................................

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Kuuhaku_28
Kuuhaku_28Lv4

the beginning of the story is very bad, lost his sword, becomes a slave, no personality, masochistic mc

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