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MAXandMILLS
MAXandMILLSAuthor6mth
2024-05-14 16:39

Mandatory Author Review Here! I've decided to drop this review at 100 chapters to provide you with an overall highlight of the story. If you are a fan of immersive sci-fi, this book has been tailor-made for you. It covers the entire evolution of science fiction, starting from the earth-level to the harnessing energy from stars and even time travel. I hope you follow me on this journey through and witness these. The story is built around a naive 17 year old (will later turn into a grown man) who has never been faced with such trials and responsibilities. Responsibilities that he will have to accept to save the extinction of humanity with the help of a chip which burrowed into the back of his neck and could speak to him. The characters in the story are incredibly diverse and unique, making it easy for you readers to become fans of them. Each character's behavior evolves with the story, and every single one of them plays an important role in the plot. The writing style may not be perfect, but I'm constantly improving with each chapter in my first book. Please point out any grammatical errors you come across. The pacing can be described as slightly above average. While a few themes were inspired by Star Wars, the majority of them were influenced by Star Trek. Nevertheless, the story itself is completely original. This is a tragedy novel as people get to die often in it. The red shade will be regularly imagined by you while you read. Not only does this novel focus on the plot and the pre-plot, it also gives a clear understanding of the motives and attitudes of the characters. Yes, this novel contains intergalactic wars and more deeper sci-fi context that are intertwined, providing plot twists and deeper insights that I believe novel readers will love. It has everything a reader might desire. I would love this to be one of the best books on this platform and I highly recommend it. Apologies if the word count in each chapter seems to be small, but it all changes from the 100th chapter. So please don't be deterred by the small chapters early on.

Comeet Legacy

MAXandMILLS
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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxLv13

So let’s go ahead and get an early review underway that’s spoiler free. For writing quality it’s a 4/5 here And having a 4/5 isn’t bad it means what you’re writing is easy to understand and the message gets across nice and easy just a bit often you might miss a , or you use the wrong verb for a situation. All in all the first 6 chapters are good Update is a free pass as we only have 6 chapters at the moment. The story development throughout the first 6 chapters is fast and some unique deaths early so I have to give it a 5/5 here but we need a lot more in the coming chapters but it’s a great start. The character designs are simple and straight forward but they are 3 dimensional with uniqueness to them with flaws so that’s always good to see. Finally the world background is a 4/5 right now as we need to see more of this destroyed earth and the lasting effects these creatures have had on it. Again a 4/5 is good it shows your world building is on the right track. I look forward to doing a second review once you hit 50 chapters. Good luck and god speed Author.

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KendoKPN
KendoKPNLv14

It had good plot and unique story, but the mc it’s just so unbearable I had to drop it

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MAXandMILLS
MAXandMILLSAuthor

five stars...of course...Here I am, penning yet another review for the novel as the first volume's end draws near. Comeet Legacy is a sci-fi story I've taken to for quite some time now...., not only because of its plot but mostly due to the two contrasting male leads. And it'd be best published here. This review also serves as a medium for Q&A, so feel free to drop any queries. Meanwhile, here's a quick overall assessment of the story. It is a sci-fi evolution from a dystopian setting to the usual space opera, heavily laden with the Academy arc. I recommend it if you're looking for a story to indulge yourself in, and it's a good book to binge-read, thanks to the short time intervals between chapters. The WeaktoStrong trope is excessive in the beginning chapters, justifiably so, because of the necessity for character growth...yep. With a scarce system trope that I had to introduce in a welcoming manner. Follow another😏 science fiction saga of Levi and his son, Dahon, as they tackle not only planetary conflicts but intergalactic ones too.

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YoungCreator
YoungCreatorLv4

THIS REVIEW CONTAIN MAJOR SPOILERS!! PROCEED AT YOUR OWN RISK!! This is a book that is reminiscent of the star wars vibes. It is definitely one you'd love to indulge in. It's writing quality is top notch, though not perfect; you rarely notice any mistakes. The way the author portrays the dialogue is not only ideal but realistic. It's one of those books you read with a vivid imagination in your mind! For me, the story development is quite okay. It fully incorporates its weak to strong tag. As it steadily explains how Levi goes from 'the boy with the lead syndrome' to a leader. The novel spends a fair amount of time on its arcs with each transitions being better! Levi's life is changed after he meets Lexi, who not only is his main tool to strength, exposes him to truths that give him a purpose. He builds up a strong will after witnessing a fair share of loss around him. He soon shoulders a lot of responsibilities allowing his to adapt in personalities. Another thing that makes me to aw at this book is it's character designs. Man! There are great. Updating stability? This is one of the strongest point about the author. Since I've been reading this work. He's been diligently updating dailing. He's so consistent that there's no way we wouldn't get a 5 stars! World background? Yes, the story is based on modern earth, but it makes way for Intergalactic travel in the future. Initially, it's even threatened by aliens known as Rókks! I assure you, this gonna be one of you best sci-fi reads! Well, it is for me.

3mth
Forteller
FortellerLv13

As simple and as free flowing as the writing is, it's definitely a feast for my eyes. I capture the words as images in my head perfectly, dialogue is very good even though it's still surface level. There's just enough foreboding to keep me intrigued at to what's actually going on behind the scenes. I'm yet to see the power system in this novel so hopefully that will be explained later. Characters flow nicely! And World design is literally almost perfect. In all, I will be seated for more of this.

7mth
Izana07
Izana07Lv12

Yo, been reading this for a while and I have to say it's quite an interesting read, and the grammar is being worked on tremendously in the latest chapters, the plot is really nice and I can't wait to see it develop more! You have grabbed my attention!

3mth
King91OM
King91OMLv1

Very engaging and intriguing start. I don't know why this gave me a little Ben10 vibe. MC have to discover his abilities after gaining his suit which gave me Crysis vibe as well. Awaiting for more chapters for further development!

8mth
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