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wilfredbedrin
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Oh, I like where this is going! It's clear from Scene 1 that there's a bit of mystery surrounding Antoinette, which definitely piques my curiosity. The dialogue feels natural and it's easy to picture the school setting and the characters' interactions. In Scene 2, I can sense the warmth in Ruth's family, and the mention of Wisdom's interest in inventions is a nice touch. It adds depth to his character and could be a cool plot point if the story explores that further. I'm intrigued by Antoinette's situation. Why does she seem troubled? And I'm curious about Ruth's reaction to her friend's distress. It seems like there's a story there waiting to unfold!

MY GREATEST ENEMY

wilfredbedrin

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