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The mystery enveloping Kaesu's story in pursuit of answers about her grandfather's death is enough to rouse curiosity. Although there are numerous aspects that need improvement, I can see potential for this to evolve into a beguiling novel. Furthermore, the author has shown remarkable improvement with their writing and storytelling - kudos to that! Regardless of the score I've given, I can envision this becoming a piece in its own right. Well done, author!