Hope you like my Fan-Fic! please put down any ideas or suggestions here. I feel very happy with the way this is looking so far and I hope you will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it!

This review is an early one made to support the author and his promising story. The story has real potential. I really liked the start of the story, i cant write a full review for the story because there is only 3 chapters. However, i can confidently say its one of the best Overlord fics starts ive ever read. The Mc race and morals are going to be really interesting to follow as he faces the diffrent "priorities" of nazarick Residents. Good job and Keep up the good work Mr.Author !!!!!!!!!!!

Here's my honest review. Other than few spelling and grammatical mistakes writting quality and updates are decent. Personally I didn't like the creative freedom you took for creating the lore about angels and stuff. I don't know why you made mc and aura travel with ainz as an adventurer when you could have made him to spy on other countries. Also ainz losing against mc was very underwhelming the fact mc is supposed to be a librarian and made to be a meta build is stupid you know there would have been nothing wrong with mc losing to ainz but the other way around just made the whole thing just too awkward. Did you take inspiration for this fic from yellowness? Because that story has been suffering from stagnation. I wonder what end goals does the mc have as being with nazarick would just be boring and going against nazarick is simply impossible unless you completely mess up the story.

The story is good. There are usually no Angel main characters in Webnovel. If so, it's usually Harem. This is annoying too. This fanfiction is hidden gold. I wish success to the author.

Thank you for the great story so far. I’ve read a few Overlord Fanfics that were good but were always dropped. Yours, so far, has had the best start and I can only hope and beg that you don’t ever feel the need or want to drop this story. Please be the first to finish an Overlord Fanfic!

I'll rate it 5 star from the synopsis, I usually don't care about mistakes but if I see one I'll tell y'all

La serie está bien, no es lo mejor que puedas encontrar sobre overlord, pero tampoco lo peor, las habitaciones de escritura del autor pueden mejorar, pero a pesar de algunos errores e el guión, que causan ligeras inconsistencias, es una historia divertida para leer rápidamente cuando tienes tiempo libre, si tuviera que darle una puntuación, sería 6/10, con un poco de trabajo duro, está historia entrara en el top.

The author was too vague about harem And he changes his mind about stuff in the novel instead of editing it out, But if you’re OK with reading a two person harem then I recommended, the novel was good

This book is great 😃👍. Currently one of my favorites right now. Hope the author wont drop this. Would re-read and recommend 11/10.

There are a few grammatical errors and inconsistencies but it's still a fun read