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I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick
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Actualy, probably yes, but it wont be for a while and wont be the main point of the story, it will be a side dish of sorts.
Romance_guy:Romance?
😉 hey, Its not my fault gamer names are silly! and its not just Thot, its t Thot merged with thought, So its fine...
ferferfer2:hey author-san, did you realy named your mc "thot"?
I would say that this story is flawed from jump. Ainz Oowl Goan(?) is a guild for non-human characters that lead to a more evil race or build. Their on morality is subjective, but the race should still hold up. While what’s currently here is good, I would say that you should’ve made Thoth and eldritch race, like eldritch scion or something. It would fit his level, the guild, his role/job and his name. Angel’s are from an enemy guild that appeared in the new world before Ainz and they are pretty much the antithesis of Ainz and Nazarick(?).
MarAuthor:😉 hey, Its not my fault gamer names are silly! and its not just Thot, its t Thot merged with thought, So its fine...
I think him being an angel makes things more interesting, it would make ainz more paranoid for Reasons I wont spoil And it would make the denizens of Nazarick clash with him about morality, which could go in a LOT of diferent ways
Adramelech:I would say that this story is flawed from jump. Ainz Oowl Goan(?) is a guild for non-human characters that lead to a more evil race or build. Their on morality is subjective, but the race should still hold up. While what’s currently here is good, I would say that you should’ve made Thoth and eldritch race, like eldritch scion or something. It would fit his level, the guild, his role/job and his name. Angel’s are from an enemy guild that appeared in the new world before Ainz and they are pretty much the antithesis of Ainz and Nazarick(?).
Not sure, I will probably see and allow the plot to develop organically on its own, though I do have to say, I have a bias towards Aura so far, but IDK, nothing is set in stone
sari_saarinen:whos love intrest
He has the power of a god and cares about human ants? Why would he come into conflict with the strongest power in the New World?
MarAuthor:I think him being an angel makes things more interesting, it would make ainz more paranoid for Reasons I wont spoil And it would make the denizens of Nazarick clash with him about morality, which could go in a LOT of diferent ways
Beyond_:He has the power of a god and cares about human ants? Why would he come into conflict with the strongest power in the New World?
how about Rubedo(Albedo's Younger Sister) 🫡🫡. Not much known about her in the novel beside 'she is the strongest Entity of Nazarick' so there are lots of loophole to exploit 😂😂
MarAuthor:Not sure, I will probably see and allow the plot to develop organically on its own, though I do have to say, I have a bias towards Aura so far, but IDK, nothing is set in stone
applo43:how about Rubedo(Albedo's Younger Sister) 🫡🫡. Not much known about her in the novel beside 'she is the strongest Entity of Nazarick' so there are lots of loophole to exploit 😂😂
