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KeVi作者7mth
2024-04-02 02:26

I don't see the point in forcing praise for my book, but if you're interested in a somewhat original story about Naruto, I recommend reading at least a few first chapters. It's not a perfect story, there's plenty of room for improvement, but it's something I personally wanted to write as a beginner author.

Namikaze Naruto — Insidious God

KeVi
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Toxic_6985
Toxic_6985Lv1

MC is crippled, with his chakra system destroyed, which prevents him from using Shinobi techniques. Additionally, he will die at a young age due to the lack of Life Energy. It's the first time I've seen a character so severely weakened, whose fate is literally sealed from the start, and seemingly nothing can be done about it. There's no system or anything else that could help MC, only his high intellect and powerful mind. I've finished reading the first arc, and I can confidently say that Naruto is taking a path I didn't expect. He's also not healed right away; by the end of the first arc, he remains almost the same as he was, and I don't yet know how long he'll remain 'crippled' but I've noticed a few hints that could lead to something... The author leads the story slowly and in detail, there are really a lot of details, and the author explains everything thoroughly. Naruto's journey to power and a long life is incredible. I can't wait to see what happens next.

7mth

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_CharlesLv10

Man this needs more attention. grammar is impeccable, author has good attention to detail and really knows his stuff.only issue is the occasional huge wall of text, but that's really rare and I assume it's because the author gets carried away whike writing.Love the intelligent MC route too.can't wait to see more of this!!

7mth
Clown_Of_God
Clown_Of_GodLv6

What is the point in reading a Naruto fanfic if the character doesn't use Naruto world powers?........................................................

5mth
Go_jo
Go_joLv1

amazing story keep going[img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية][img=توصية]

4mth
Arkzero
ArkzeroLv4

The story is a hidden gem, with its engaging plot and rich emotional depth. The unique perspective of viewing chakra through a scientific lens adds a refreshing twist, making the story interesting. The power system is intriguing and new to me, it's like a ki in murim but only the surface of it is shown so it's a twist in naruto. The only problem to me is the chapters available are little but the word count is more so it even but hope the author releases chapter 3 or 4 a week if possible 🥺🥺but if the quality of work downgrade please do it in your own pace.

5mth
Poke_verse
Poke_verseLv2

It's really good. I'll keep it vague so you can enjoy yourself ..................................................................................................................................................

7mth
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