Review Detail of gustavo_hhhhdsd in Spider-Man 0X
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I'm writing through the translator because I don't know English, the first 8/9 chapters were good, the development with Michele, the dialogues, everything was incredible, but out of nowhere it went downhill with his aunt starting to like him out of nowhere, fantasizing about him and etc. I was very disappointed but I still continued, then the flash tries to kill him, but I continued, and soon after a beggar saves him and we discover that the beggar has a history with oscorp and so on. In conclusion, it started well and became just another fiction without logical development (the first 8 chapters were on the way, a shame they were lost)
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That's why you should use a good translator. I am pretty sure I made May's feelings for Peter very clear from the early chs. Flash's situation has already been explained in proper details. Even the homeless guy's past has been explained properly with details. And what connection are you talking about? He was just a retired worker 😂 for like over 20 yrs. I haven't left any plot holes regarding these characters. That's why I hate translator.
man, I'm saying that it doesn't make sense that she already likes him seeing how the previous Peter acted, and there wasn't much time in this body for her to already like the current and confident him (you know what I mean?) the flash part I thought was forced because it's really stupid for him to try to kill someone the way it was done in this story, and the beggar's part meant that his past hatred towards the company that the prota is going after was very "convenient". I hope you understand what I meant now.
Xcalibur_Xc:That's why you should use a good translator. I am pretty sure I made May's feelings for Peter very clear from the early chs. Flash's situation has already been explained in proper details. Even the homeless guy's past has been explained properly with details. And what connection are you talking about? He was just a retired worker 😂 for like over 20 yrs. I haven't left any plot holes regarding these characters. That's why I hate translator.
I think 42 chs is good enough to show the relationship between May and Peter. And May already had a thing for Peter but after he got his Spider power, things changed as I have already explained what that power is. As for Flash, I have explained the reason and situation that made him who he is. As for Josh, how do you expect a story of flow without a plot lol? Anyway, both of us shared our opinions. Let's leave it at that.👍
gustavo_hhhhdsd:man, I'm saying that it doesn't make sense that she already likes him seeing how the previous Peter acted, and there wasn't much time in this body for her to already like the current and confident him (you know what I mean?) the flash part I thought was forced because it's really stupid for him to try to kill someone the way it was done in this story, and the beggar's part meant that his past hatred towards the company that the prota is going after was very "convenient". I hope you understand what I meant now.