[AS PROMISED THIS IS MY REVIEW AFTER READING ALL AVAILABLE CHAPTERS ] WRITING :🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 STORY:🌟🌟🌟🌟 CHARACHTER:🌟🌟🌟 UPDATING STABILITY:🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 WORLD BACKGROUND :🌟🌟🌟🌟 The writing quality is a bit rough around the edges but improvement is visible as the story progresses. The pacing is a bit off and the tone of the story is in shambles but it needs a bit more chapters to call it hopeless. Well the Main charachter is an O.C. and a common sense lacking uchiha with an unhealthy likeness towards green and a tendency to be prone to violence . The author has been uploading daily so no complaints. The Naruto elements have been integrated to the world of JJK without being cringe and i am thankful for that . I HAVE HIGH HOPES FOR THE STORY GOOD LUCK WITH MAKING THE STORY AUTHOR
Stingleese
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