Finally!! A cobra kai fanfic! I don’t care if it’s bad or not, its an automatic 5 stars for me

I bow down to you for your writing speed and consistency.Like how do you write so much bro and still keep the pace of other novels.just your effort to write this much is enough to give 5 stars.

A great novel without a doubt, for me personally it is refreshing to finally see something good about Cobra Kai

Idk if it’s just me but the fanfic won’t save to my library and it keeps bugging when I try to read it it’s very upsetting

Great story Kobro Kai, I like it, hope the main character isn't stupid and a bit OP, hopefully there won't be too much unnecessary drama. Thanks for the story

Let's go my warrior... Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

I would like to start off that I only read up until chapter 5, so take this review with a grain of salt, and I will be mostly focusing on the main character/writing quality. The two main issues I noticed right off the bat is the fact that the character adapted to his circumstances extremely quickly. and the pacing of the story is over the roof, and to be quite fair. It makes no sense. As a thirteen year old child people would expect them to be full of questions and have issues adapting, but instead we see him act like an adult and make rational and extremely unlike choices for a child. This makes no sense considering he just woke up and after an hour of him living his new life he already realized he is in the karate kid/cobra kai world. His interaction with his father is also forceful, but that might be because of his strained relationship with his parents. The pacing makes the unnatural adaptation of the child even worse, and adding another layer of doubt towards the novels progression. Since the pacing and character are so bad it is starting to affect the story development since chapter 5, and making the development less competent. basically we are rushing to build the house and forgot to reinforce the foundation, this will create plothole which leads to dissatisfaction. World Background is 5*, cuz its a fanfiction held inside an already popular series. Updates is 5*. lots of chapters and a really responsive author. good overall

Of all your books, this is the best of them all, the story is fluid and consistent, the writing style is the best so far, the characters seem real and not just secondary and the The protagonist's relationship with her friend is very cute (I wrote in the translator there may be errors)

Author, you’re an awesome guy and I applaud you for that. Very understanding person I must say, I think this novel has the potential to be popular even though it may not be my most favorite novel. I’ll support you no matter what!