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GeneralDeFartos_L
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It's just average. The story concept isn't original, I read a lot of similar stories with this setup. MC is a go with the flow guy, he's alright. The cheat and background and all that aren't explained, the author acts as if he explained it, but nothing is properly explained. Is it a bowl? a system? what abilities? how does MC know how to create gu? World building is non-existent. Characters are superficial. You won't see any depth in this story. Pacing is horrendous, it's so slow, the author pads words and fills a waste of space paragraphs. Repeated descriptions are a lot. Just felt like I read a lot but I gained nothing. If author focused on producing quality work instead of padding words and filling word count, I might have been interested in continuing to read even if it's a shallow story.

Parasite (Gu) Breeding Longveity Path: Starting from the love-enamored Gu

Thousand Lakes True Person

Liked it!

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