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2023-12-01 00:34

This book is different from the other system books I've read before. It is so refreshing and well written. 👏👏👏 The MC is also so mature that he is likable. Fun read but it would be so much better with more scenes including the involvement of the system i suggest upgrading the role and functions of the system

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