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SquishedElephant
SquishedElephantLv134mth
2024-06-26 22:42

I really wish I could give a lower rating but I loved the world building and the characterization of the pet beast. To be honest I actually enjoyed reading this until the content kept repeating and the story had obvious gaps in it. I can't even read the next chapter because almost the entire chapter I just read is a repeat of the previous one and it was a conversation that ended on a cliff hanger. Now I have no idea what they spoke about and what the first few sentences of the next chapter mean. None of my reports on the major problems I found have been answered either so far to my knowledge. I'm glad I didn't spend as much on this story as others since I was able to binge read a portion using free reading and use discounts for coins. But it was still weeks worth of fast passes and coins are hard to earn and cases like this make it hard to justify buying them. I would rather suffer through a bad mtl than let a seemingly careless TL profit. And even though the author sometimes liked repeating descriptions I still enjoyed it while I could and would love to continue reading if a better TL and good editor could be found for this story. I wish I was able to endure until Twelve was "rescued" and complete her evolution or until one of the others evolved into an emperor beast.

Unserious Beast Tamer

Book shortage forced to write a book
3.3
802 Chs

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nyomie
nyomieLv15

at which chapter does it keep repeating? I just started this book.

4mth
SquishedElephant
SquishedElephantLv13

I don't really remember but I think it started in one of the hundreds? Probably the 400's. I just ignored it till it ruined the chapter I stopped at. Hopefully you shouldn't come across that problem till the 400's maybe even later if they saw the reports and fixed it.

4mth
4
kitsune_fox_foxy
kitsune_fox_foxyLv6

The repeat chapter started when the author separate a chapter into fours part story, its a consistence repeat and missing content. whenever you see --------------- breaking there a chance the repeated content. Also cause part 2 and 3 most repeat content and waste of point. This story is unique but it suck when the author don't check there work, as we can't report the app about it.

3mth
4
Deicid3
Deicid3Lv12

update!

1mth
SquishedElephant
SquishedElephantLv13

DID THEY FIX IT?!?

Deicid3:update!
1mth
SquishedElephant
SquishedElephantLv13

Nvm I checked and they haven't or at least they haven't fixed the one I stopped at 😞

Deicid3:update!
1mth
Deicid3
Deicid3Lv12

where did you stop at?

SquishedElephant:Nvm I checked and they haven't or at least they haven't fixed the one I stopped at 😞
1mth
SquishedElephant
SquishedElephantLv13

561, they deleted practically the whole chapter and reposted the previous one instead ಥ⁠╭⁠╮⁠ಥ

Deicid3:where did you stop at?
1mth
Other Reviews
Unit29
Unit29Lv4

Stops on chapter 10 before locking? why would I read this? That's not enough chapters to even decide if I want to read it or not, never mind actually spending something to unlock more chapters of I don't know.

9mth

BigBoyJenkins
BigBoyJenkinsLv15

Report this book for junk. All it is , is AI generated garbage. It probably wont even finish and just stop uploading one day. Those who have been arojnd webnovel long enough , know that this is just a fake book.

9mth
Emamo_Awoo
Emamo_AwooLv2

Not sure why everyone hating, especially for the most random reasons. It’s nothing special and can get repetitive, but the characters are fleshed out, translation is good, plot seems to have been planned out decently and it doesn’t have those edgy/cringey Chinese tropes. Overall a chill relaxing read with occasional action to spice it up. The chapters here get locked super early, but u can find more online

7mth
Blazzing18
Blazzing18Lv15

Y is this book even out?? its just like other books that have the same thing writen in them its stupid and shouldnt be in here amd should be taken down!!

10mth
StormGodling
StormGodlingLv15

This book is absolutely amazing up until the chapters start both repeating and skipping stuff altogether I really love this story but hate how it seems as if it's self sabotaging itself lately I hope you can get an editor and fix the chapters soon.

3mth
Shadowmaker6
Shadowmaker6Lv15

nothing super special, but a decent read with regular uploads, a little while after chapter 500 chapters keep on repeating some content and missing others, there are even sections where chapters are missing because of repeats which makes it difficult to read. Though the story is decent, it's not good enough for me to keep reading through that, paragraph repeats I can take, whole chapter repeats and missing chapters I can't.

4mth
Michael_Noble
Michael_NobleLv15

I like this book. the world seems well thought out and it is a fun and engaging read

6mth
Adrian_Rivera_6579
Adrian_Rivera_6579Lv14

over 10 times the chapters which should have been a continuation from the previous chapter was the exact same word for word as the previous chapter. The story is completed but please fix the repeated chapters 🙏

1mth
THE_PHANTOM_GOD
THE_PHANTOM_GODLv4

anyone can khow the _RAW_ PLEASE SEND ME

4mth
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