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Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv21yr
2023-10-17 19:54

the writing grammatically and stylishly good but the plot is literally half missing. the story starts in a climax and we know nothing about the mc or his powers except that he is comically overpowered and flexing on everyone. the vast majority of what is currently written is POV's from side characters too. It seems like an exciting climax too, but it's hard to enjoy because the MC is too strong and we don't even know him. Even if the after the invasion the mc's plot kicks in it's still gonna be super boring after the invasion, which so far has just been reactions. 3 stars because it could be a pretty good story if it wasn't missing the first 100 chapters.

Technomancer in MCU

IdleMuse0307
3.7
148 Chs

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The_Noobulas
The_NoobulasLv15

this seems to be a continuation of another authors work I was reading called Technomacer of Marvel they even have the same ai and power set but even then this seems to just start in the middle of the chitari invasion so even if we see this as a continuation of that one (which is on hiatus currently) it still skips approximately 4 to 5 years of content, but ye it seems to be a continuation of the other since they have ALOT in common including the ai, the rescue droids, and even the rivalry with Jarvis and seemingly Tony

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Hymaster986
Hymaster986Lv13

This story has a lot of potential. Please continue it. Also don't make the MC stupid to follow the Avengers and Fury to in their delusion and idiocy. I want to see the full/true potential of MC's ability. Please don't add harem.

1yr

Kickedelm0
Kickedelm0Lv5

for now it has great potential. haven't seen mistakes. and let hope mc doesn't suffer from hero complex. it would be great if author add pictures to his invention.

1yr
Operr
OperrLv4

I've caught up (chp 21) and until now there was no (or very few) MC POV's, all of the FF consist on the reactions of other characters to certain events caused by the main MC, like Giga_Weeb said in a prior review, we know very little about our MC, writing quality is actually good for a FF, other than that I already gave my opinion, read if you don't mind an absent MC (literally his AI has more dialogues than him)

1yr
Insert_Here
Insert_HereLv13

It just feels to rushed, it could have been good but you just rushed through the plot too fast, better luck next time [img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv14

There is literally nothing to read here, the character is supposed to be "thrown" into Marvel, but we start when he already has his resources, control over his "powers" (because I have no idea what his power is), and this so far is a reaction fic, there's no MC Pov, just the other characters/organizations reacting. Boring

1yr
Rodrigo_Nunes
Rodrigo_NunesLv1

Meh meh meh meh meh meh meh neh meh , história sem pé nem cabeça... , meh meh meh meh meh , história sem pé nem cabeça.... , meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh

1yr
larkin_klarkin
larkin_klarkinLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
R0B
R0BLv2

I thought this is going to be a good story, but instead we have a finally from the start. I don't understand, what's the point of all of this? Why should I read it?

1yr
_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1

Very powerful protagonist. The story was a little boring meh😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

1yr
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