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Oliver_Clark_2978Lv32mth
2024-08-12 23:23

this book clearly takes to much inspiration from bloodline system. The main character has very similar powers to Gutav from bloodline system even their friend groups have basically the same powers. the moment I realized how much of a ripoff this is is the beginning of the school training because it is literally the same method of training. The author added very little of his own creation except for character design and names. All the author has changed is the really fast pacing which is like skipping major arcs in bloodline system to accelerate his story. If you have read or do read bloodline system you will clearly see what I'm talking about. The biggest thing is it took a few hundred chapters for the bloodline system mc to get in the academy.

Chaos Devourer System

Supreme_IQ
4.3
762 Chs

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Supreme_IQ
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Updated Author Review: As we’ve reached a total of 750+ chapters, I believe it’s time to address some of the common questions and concerns. One of the most frequently asked questions is: “Is this a harem novel? How many female leads, if any?” Well, as of now, with 750 chapters written, the MC has not shown any interest in settling down with a female lead, and he is still a virgin. So, if you’re reading this for romance or intimate scenes, I’m afraid this might not be the story for you. Secondly, I’ve received quite a few complaints regarding the mixing of stats and poor grammar. I understand there have been a lot of negative reviews about these issues, and I’ve taken them to heart. In response, I decided to pause writing temporarily until these problems are fully addressed. I’m happy to announce that I’ve hired a qualified and experienced editor to help re-edit the book, starting from Chapter 1. He plans to edit 20 chapters a day until we reach Chapter 750. Starting from October 15th, you can expect 20 edited chapters every day. If you prefer to read the corrected version, I recommend calculating the number of edited chapters based on the date you’re reading this review and adjusting your reading pace accordingly. Another 20 chapters will be edited the following day, and so on. If you still encounter grammatical errors, please try clearing the app’s cache or delete and re-download the book. That should fix the issue. Regarding updates, since I’ve now hired an editor, I plan to resume releasing new chapters—at least 2 per day—starting soon. Lastly, to all those who were disappointed by the pause in updates, I sincerely apologize. I’m still learning the ropes of being an author, and seeing negative comments can be tough to handle. That’s why I chose to stop temporarily and fix the issues before continuing. Thank you for your patience and understanding. I’m grateful to everyone who has stuck with me this far, and I’m committed to seeing this story through to the end. Muchos gracias to you all.

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Supreme_IQ
Supreme_IQAuthor

SSHHHH, quiet, just here to give my book a quick five star review. It's not shameless if you're quiet about it.Anyway we can also use this for some Q&A about the novel and I'll reply back within 60seconds.Trust me I'm always ON!

1yr
QuadraKellz
QuadraKellzLv14

I can’t believe I wasted so much coins on this garbage. Author is braindead. Doesn’t keep track of system stats. Confuses MC’s name with MC from his other novel. He created side characters and wrote chapters from their POV only to axe them later on. He also dropped the Chaos Devourer theme for some reason later on into the story. Just absolute garbage. DO NOT GIVE YOUR MONEY TO THIS LAZY AUTHOR. If you want to read it, do so when it is “limited free.”

2mth
Supremeking92
Supremeking92Lv12

One of the best novel I have read so far. I see the author added villain tag and this was also the reason I gave this novel a shot I hope the author don’t make the Mc naive. I want to see the Mc digging graves to devour and secretly killing people to increase his strength. Author I hope u make this story really long and don’t drop this novel cause it has a lot of potential

1yr
ImDove
ImDoveLv11

One of the best system novel I have read so far[img=gift]I look forward to reading and taking tips.

1yr
Frost_Geek
Frost_GeekLv3

Even though it's in the early stages in progressing quite nicely keep it going. It has massive potential to be at the top Author don't mind bad reviews you are doing great

1yr
Ben_Davis_9909
Ben_Davis_9909Lv1

While I won't deny the fact that the story is well written, I just can't continue reading it. Juxtaposing this novel with MBS, the only difference would be when he went to the academy. Tbh, I hate it when the academy arc comes, like a whole lot cliche happen there. Anyways, when can I get a loner mc(pls not a half baked one)

2mth
NicholasAren
NicholasArenLv15

I made it to chapter 230 roughly and I've noticed there are a significant amount of chapters that are from entirely different stories. one of the annoying things outside of the continuous spelling and grammar mistakes is his insistent use on immediately. in one chapter you can see immediately being used six or so times or more

2mth
Immortallord
ImmortallordLv12

so far, all in all. to me. this is the best novel that I have ever read on this platform. I am infact lost of what to say. The novel is just that good. and Supreme IQ. well apart from the fact that I am here to write a heartfelt review, I am also here to congratulate you. pretty soon, you will surpass dark magus on on the whole rankings, cause I believe yours is better. and also a challenge from me. hehehe. next year or upper next year. not sure due to secondary school problems. but anyway. by then, I plan to release a novel even better than yours. though I can see it's going to.be pretty hard, basically am trying to ascend the nine Heavens as a mortal. but am sure I can do it. hehehe. Anyways my thought to anyone who sees this review. my advise is to read this novel. or else you will surely regret it. great job Author sama!!👏

10mth
Void_Daoist
Void_DaoistLv12

A perfect 5star for this novel. If there was a 6, I would give it. Guys, this novel as the potential to be among the top three best system novels out there. You guys give it a try honestly.

1yr
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