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Pires_1123
Pires_1123Lv41yr
2023-10-15 01:01

The low rating is mostly beccause of two points. I don't like the MC personality (if it improves I'll change the rating) and second, when you talked about changing bodies, you wrote that it's up to him when he wants to change and for how much time. Because both bodies need to eat and drink, this sentence makes it look like time paused when he isn't in that body or that there is some kind of time difference. (A day as 24h and normaly you sleep for 8h so, if he spends 16h (24-8=16) in one body, the other will be sleeping for 16h.

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Aalsime
AalsimeAuthor

It seems I wasn't clear enough but time doesn't stop when he is in the other world. Sure, i didn't mention the time difference but i thought it would be easy to understand because when he was transported to the other world it was night and when he returned after spending a major part of the day, it was morning around 8 A.M. because I clearly mentioned that after he exercised in the park for two hours, it was 10 A.M. As for his personality, well, everyone has their preferences. In the end, I'll only say this, read a few more chapters. If you like it, good. If not, don't force yourself.

Aalsime
AalsimeAuthor

Also, you should've waited because I was going to mention it when he logged back in.

Pires_1123
Pires_1123Lv4

I'll read a few more chapters and then make a new review.

Aalsime:It seems I wasn't clear enough but time doesn't stop when he is in the other world. Sure, i didn't mention the time difference but i thought it would be easy to understand because when he was transported to the other world it was night and when he returned after spending a major part of the day, it was morning around 8 A.M. because I clearly mentioned that after he exercised in the park for two hours, it was 10 A.M. As for his personality, well, everyone has their preferences. In the end, I'll only say this, read a few more chapters. If you like it, good. If not, don't force yourself.
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