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meHzyk
meHzykLv49mth
2024-01-17 03:52

good proposal I read some chapters and there are some cliché ideas but I don't hate the "cliché" I just hate it when it's done wrong. but I must say that you missed the chance to make a unique character with Whitebeard's characteristics, "ah but he's giant" simple make a plot of him being a genetic mutation, there is also the question of the name, I could use Whitebeard's name, it's very unique and cool. (I wrote using the translator on my keyboard)

Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe

Story_Teller_229
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75 Chs

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Story_Teller_229
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I'm only giving it one star. I've heard it's a thing now.

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IMFROM808
IMFROM808Lv13

Why John Wick? what's wrong with Edward Newgate?

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edu_rodeiro
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more pleasethere haven't been any interesting marvek stories lately that aren't filled with debauchery

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MMBarqawi
MMBarqawiLv4

He will go for the head thanos.

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Ash_D_Born
Ash_D_BornLv4

Broooo don’t drop its actually really good

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pirvu_mircea
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劇透

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ThinkersLv1

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Mann_Teufortian
Mann_TeufortianLv4

This fanfic is really not that great. The MC just gets whatever he wants right off the bat, the very definition of a silver spoon. Free system? okay, that's fine. But he literally gets the super soldier serum in the first chapters to cut the amount of training he has to do. House gets wrecked? Lucky Tony is a real estate agent! but that's not all... the characters are way off: the author treats Iron Man like a maid. Tony Stark is a friend of the MC's family, and he'll bend over backwards to spoonfeed him exposition and give him everything he wants for free. The MC even feels comfortable ordering him around, and Tony just takes it. the writing is mostly fine apart from a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but the character interactions are just so robotic it's not fun at all to read. 20 chapters at the time of review

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Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

well written and no huge redflags (like other people in the story knowing that he is not from this universe like the ancient one). the mc himself hasn't seemed to create goals outside of getting more powerful, which is fine albeit a little boring. I like the character interactions, conversations are written in a way that is interesting. so long as the stability of updates remains consistent than it should shape up to be a good novel.

1yr
Its_Britney_Bitch
Its_Britney_BitchLv4

i am reading this because its not a harem😍😍

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