I feel that so far its a good read , no mistakes that actually really caught my eye, just the Privillage chapters start at like chapter 39 wich is a bummer , but will see in the future , keep up the work.
there is a big mistake in the beginning of the novel he is 13 years old and his sister is 5 years older so 18 later in the novel reading it i don't feel that much Time has past appendly he is 15 and I sister is still 18 so bit in consistent