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Angry_ReviewerLv131yr
2023-08-23 20:24

Is English not your first language? this is an unreadable mess. Run on sentences, no paragraphs, no proper quotations and separations for spoken words. I mean what I was able to read seemed like it might be good but the atrocious grammar ruins it completely.

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Man you beat me to it. I was abou to write this. Story seems interesting the parts I can actually read though.

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