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LibofAl
LibofAlLv1411mth
2023-12-14 17:29

This story is terrible. while the writing quality is average the way that the author goes about trying to build the MC leaves much to be desired. From not having the guts to choose between being a tamer or hunter to trying to use gods as an excuse when his 'new family' doesn't want him to leave. The MC is so stuck in the thought that he can somehow find a way beck to his original world that he can't develop in the current one. HTTYD is a world with little to no concept of magic so the thought of being able to do the impossible and traversing at least worlds, if not universes, without settling down and understanding how to get stronger in the new world is ludicrous. What I think the author should to is rewrite the first couple of chapters where the MC is forced to think about how to survive the current world first, probably through a dragon attack, and then as he ages from child to teen come to terms that he doesn't have the power to determine when or how to get home so he can stop focusing on that. I would also have MC sneak out on a merchant ship after his family refused to let him leave rather than try to use the gods as an excuse.

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Taigoness
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I had the absolute pleasure of coming across a fanfic that, without a doubt, deserves all five stars possible. This well-written, captivating story is a real treasure trove for fans of the universe it's based on. One of the first things that caught my attention was the quality of the writing. The author or author is skilled in creating engaging dialogues and detailed descriptions, which made me feel like I was inside the story. The narrative flows smoothly, maintaining a steady pace that left me eager to find out what would happen next. The characters are extremely well developed and realistic. Each of them has their own distinct personality and clear motivations, which makes them easily identifiable and memorable. In addition, the interaction between the characters is believable and exciting, creating strong ties and interesting conflicts throughout the plot. Finally, I would like to mention the dedication and commitment of the author or author to regularly update the fanfic. Nothing is more frustrating than getting caught up in a story and then waiting months for a new update. Fortunately, this isn't an issue with this fanfic, as the author or author maintains a consistent schedule, which makes for a seamless and immersive reading experience. In summary, this fanfic deserves all five stars and more. I strongly recommend reading this extraordinary story to all fans who are passionate about how to train your dragon. I apologize if my grammar is bad because I'm still learning English because it's not my native language

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