This story is terrible. while the writing quality is average the way that the author goes about trying to build the MC leaves much to be desired. From not having the guts to choose between being a tamer or hunter to trying to use gods as an excuse when his 'new family' doesn't want him to leave. The MC is so stuck in the thought that he can somehow find a way beck to his original world that he can't develop in the current one. HTTYD is a world with little to no concept of magic so the thought of being able to do the impossible and traversing at least worlds, if not universes, without settling down and understanding how to get stronger in the new world is ludicrous. What I think the author should to is rewrite the first couple of chapters where the MC is forced to think about how to survive the current world first, probably through a dragon attack, and then as he ages from child to teen come to terms that he doesn't have the power to determine when or how to get home so he can stop focusing on that. I would also have MC sneak out on a merchant ship after his family refused to let him leave rather than try to use the gods as an excuse.
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