Keep up the good work. Story is quite good just little bit fast pace. Grammar is in good conditions. Maybe story needs time skip to when original story starts. Maybe you can do more research on Astras because on power scale the normal astra are more power full than what you have shown in story. Because different astra has diff power some might be single kill some might be area kill astra for example. brahmastra is power full enough to destroy whole world. And Vasavi skati is a single kill astra.
Vedora_Tempest
被2人贊過
贊沒有回復。 來,成為第一個評論的人!