Toru's 5-star rating I'm excited about the story I'm creating, so expect many more chapters. This soap opera has an editor reviewing each chapter, so I'm confident with her performance. Hope you like it :)

Was good until the goblin part, his IQ dramatically fell leaving all of the experiences from his past life null. It was stupid.

Todo iba bien hasta que empezó a robar cual es el punto de comenzar su negocio con sus hermanos si va a robar de todas formas y no sé lo eso sino que se aprovechan de el , esto me ha decepcionado

3-4-1-3-3. The writing needs improvement, the story is a bit slow but I like it. 1 star for Character Design, it didn't make sense how Ron knew those spells from the book but Fred and George couldn't. They're already making original spells even before Ron went to Hogwarts, since Hermione didn't find anything similar from the books when Ron shared his experience with his brothers. My biggest gripe with this novel is how author changed the unlikable character with someone worse. The MC made reading this harder tbh. The updates were random so far. World Background, I still don't see any changes or hint of the wizarding world to be explored so far.

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potential is there I hope you keep writing

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The book is Pretty good so far, definitely will keep reading

....................................I'm loving the development so far. I look forward to continuing to see the next chapters.....................................................................