Item: Beyond the Limits I Became a Ninja in Naruto
Rating: 3

AspiringPedoLv41yr

2023-07-12 19:42

This is very boring to me and seems to have been written by Chatgpt and at most edited a bit to make it seem like it wasn’t. I may be wrong but just the fact that it looks like it’s been written by chatgpt just is a huge turnoff for me and just seems unrealistic. So imma have to pass on this and double it and give it to the next person.

Beyond the Limits I Became a Ninja in Naruto

Bruno_oliveira

4.0

28 Chs

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Bruno_oliveira作者

Dear Readers, As the author, I wanted to take a moment to connect with you all. Crafting this tale has been a journey of passion, perseverance, and continuous learning. Every chapter written and every character developed comes from hours of meticulous planning and brainstorming. The vivid detailing, immersive dialogues, and strategic narratives you see in this work result from countless drafts and revisions. But, as with any artist, perfection is a continuous pursuit. I am aware that the story, in its current form, may have flaws - plot inconsistencies, grammatical errors, or character inconsistencies. However, I see these not as setbacks, but as stepping stones to improve and hone my craft. Sharing my work, in all its rawness and authenticity, helps me grow as a writer. Your feedback and comments, whether they are praises or critiques, are invaluable. They motivate me to keep pushing the boundaries of my creativity, improve my storytelling, and, ultimately, deliver a narrative that you'll thoroughly enjoy. In essence, is not just Kiyoshi's story; it's my journey too. A journey of self-improvement and relentless dedication to my passion for storytelling. I am excited for what lies ahead and look forward to sharing this adventure with you. Best Regards, Author

1yr

malinizgeldiiLv1

If we give 10 points for the darkness of the naruto universe, the amount of darkness in this novel is 10\5. there are some reasons for this. More than 4 different powers are manipulating Konoha in the current timeline. For example, the uchia massacre is not just a plan supported by danzo. Doesn't hiruzen know that even though he's hogake? Of course he knows, but he does not make a sound because it is for the benefit of the village. In addition, the Akatsuki organization also supports the Uchia massacre. rather it supports black and white zetsu. In this part of the story, it is a fact that the black zetsu watches the circus Konoha. mc is constantly writing letters to the uchia trying to prevent the rebellion. After the first letter, either danzo, zetsu or direct uchia had to try to find him and find out what he knew. At this point, there is also the fact that the root organization constantly monitors the uchia campus. So if you ignore these facts and write an ff, you will be underestimating the universe. this one catches my eye a lot. And we're only in episode 10.

1yr

YardiganLv2

5 stars for writing quality, 5 stars for stability of updates, I liked the story development in the first chapter but the mc drags the story development down to 1 star for me, the character design should be 5 stars but I gave it 1 stars, why? well I really wanted to give it zero from an opinion standpoint because it is the main reason I quit the novel. I hate with a passion characters like naruto and luffy, who are naive, has experience things that should make them mature but still after 17 years of growth is still the same character who thinks of the ninja world as pokemon, all sunshine and rainbow. I like characters like kakashi, which is a balance between good and neutral evil. Not the you killed my mom and dad but I forgive you and not just that, come live with me and be the ruler of the village who's 4th ruler you killed. I'm a very passionate reader, and like I said you are a good author, its the mc and direction of your story that turned me away, but a lot of readers like characters like yours, so good luck.

1yr

OldFellowLv14

劇透

1yr

ANANTALv4

The Story Is Entertaining, so all 5 STARS. I believe that the AUTHOR will keep continue the GREAT STORY. Won't Drop Instead Complete This Good Story With Graciousness By Making it Great!

1yr

Gabe_Sama_6374Lv1

História muito boa, com um mundo intrigante e misterioso por trás. O que tenho a dizer é isso >>>>>>>>>>>>>>🤌🏼✨<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Apenas leiam

1yr

R0BLv2

Mc has no personality. I rate this novel below average. Sorry.......................................... ..................................................

1yr

RayPrimeLv4

Is this Harem? I still havent read it, it depends on your answer.

1yr

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