Review Detail of Baldsan in Naruto: Sakura's Symbiote

Well, I don't want to write a review because I already commented on what I thought was wrong, but let me tell it again First the narrative is too biased towards Sakura, while it's not wrong to be biased in a fanfiction because its fan made, it reached a point that the mc wants to die to be Sakura's tool of power. Though I don't mind it, others might not Second, the show not tell rule is not abided, for example the bonding with a squirrel was just told and the process was not spoken about, this cuts off a lot of word count that can be used to immerse readers more. (There is also the Kushina Minato nailed by Kurama scene, the very first chapter that tells the initial premise of the story disregarding the said rule.) But, I do like the part that it boldly claimed to rewrite Sakura's character that not even Maerry's goddess of ice attempted to do (I am just partly finished with that one so correct me if I'm wrong), and the fact that it declared the glaring mistakes of Kishimoto's writing style. What I also liked is the fact that somehow, the symbiote can be imagined as an existence perfectly fitted in the Naruto world. Well, my rating is 4.2 so I recommend reading it, I just think this novel can get upgraded with more improvements, and I think only motivation can drive the author to do the upgrades (I mean, who in the world is confident enough to say that they can come up with this Marvel Naruto crossover, right?)