but you went on to read up to ch 252? idk seems like your indecisive.

clearly first 130 chapters were good he said after 130 is going downhill so he needs to keep reading to get to the bad parts or what you want him to stop reading at chapter 131??

What're you on about? He literally just listed off all of the parts he thought was bad from the latest chapters which is 120 chapters later btw. For someone calling the novel "bs, trash, garbage, dogsh*t" I would expect them to drop it. And why would he need to read on to the bad parts if he clearly says he doesn't like it anymore?

1.) You don’t get to decide what OP want/ do not want to. It is his right to read further and find out whether it is still going downhill or not. That 130 mark he mentioned as a landmark. Meaning After that OP experienced the cons he mentioned. 2.) This is a public domain and authors who post here expect negative criticism. If any author or reader says otherwise then sorry this is a wrong job/ activity for them. Sure the OP overreacted but it is what it is. You need to have a heart to not take these comments personally but reflect on the concerns OP comment contains.

1. When did I decide what he should do? I clearly said I would expect him to drop it after all those foul words he dropped but again that’s his choice not mine. My last sentence was a question, not a rhetorical one either. 2. My original comment wasn’t implying he shouldn’t have read it, I was saying that he was indecisive with his choice. It doesn’t automatically mean a bad thing, like the word means he doesn’t know if he still likes it or not, and is still making a choice. No need to get butt hurt. 3. Obviously this is a public domain and the Authors will receive criticism, but that also means that if you comment, you should also be ready for people to reply to your comments with their own opinions/thoughts.

1.) There is no question mark so thought your were stating the point. 2.) Sorry but for some reason when a 3rd person read that comment it sounded like you are insinuating him indecessive. 3.) yeah but the authors/readers should provide their opinions / thoughts about the criticism but not about the person.

Alright you seem chill. There was a question mark at the last sentence. I was calling him indecisive but purely out of jokes. But yea, I understand that we should have criticism

Yeah man. At the end of day you and me want to read good book. I can agree with the OP though. Post 150 chapters, it is becoming too much drama. I want any author to read the review gather the criticism and write good storyline. Criticism is the best thing any content creator could have. It acts test case for these authors but very few leverage this. Hope this author is different.

lol i sill didn read, but your review was fun. I already got myself almost breaking the screen because some authors destroys their own stories

Oh Predictable? Then I’m guessing you’ve read similar works to this? Kindly asking for a recommendation I loved this book so much i want to eead something similar

If you want consistant and improving quality, check my novel!

oh god! savage

I think you really live up to your name man..

hey now, no need to be like that. It's true that you can't do that to another person's work. But it's not like the OP didn't read the novel. He read the novel and became greatly disappointed. There are people somewhat agreeing that the plot became somewhat bad along the way. And true, the OP should've used other nicer words perhaps. But it is OP's rights to express his opinions. And the OP didn't target the author, it is more on the story itself. And how the OP is disappointed. Perhaps the OP was excited and loved the novel at first and then those chapters happened. Don't attack OP saying he can't even write as good as this novel, nuh-uh. You don't know that. We don't know the OP. Just comment on his comment, not the person.

hey now, don't attack personally. The OP didn't even attack the author personally. Only the novel. Be nice please. Perhaps the OP might have used better words to express his disappointment, but that does not mean you can attack the OP like that. The OP was just expressing his thoughts and his disappointment in the novel. And the OP read the novel at least, and not just spreading hate randomly. I write novels myself, though I didn't post it here yet, but criticism is something that an author can learn from. The author can use it to look back and think, what might have gone wrong? and what can the author do to improve? you can criticize the OP's comment or the wording, but don't attack the OP personally. That's just wrong. i'm sorry if, I might've offend you. But I just feel bad at your comment because I didn't read any personal attack from the OP. And the OP just expresses his opinion about the novel.

He literally said that its garbage and that the author doesnt have creativity, is that criticism? Really? Its just looks like he is venturing his anger about the book saying this mean words.. And just to clarify, he chose his own username 👍

Thanks for the correction. And to the OP I'm sorry for speaking like that. It's just, I think this is a good novel. Sure June strayed from his gangster life and all. Anyways, I hope you accept this apology. And I think SandKastle is doing a great job.👍

yeah, he said the novel is garbage. After the certain chapters he mentioned. I think he was just utterly disappointed and was following his feelings more than thinking clearly. You know how it feels when you were reading something actually good and was excited about it? then while reading further, you got so disappointed. Personally, if this happened to me, I usually just say it out loud. I don't have the energy and courage to go and write a critic to others. And, it may sound bad, but yeah. It is criticism. If you think about it, isn't he just asking the author to think outside the box? And not follow the usual trend? at least that was what I perceived about it. As an author(well, I wrote some stories and posted on another platform), that's how I perceived it. Because I asked myself, what if I was the author when I read that. I would think. Why would OP say that? What made/prompt him to think so? How am I going to remedy/change/improve so that it won't happened again? Then I would also go and asked for another opinion, just to be sure. There are times when you write, you wouldn't notice if there's something wrong. Perhaps, because you were too focus on writing or you were distracted. And there are times that perhaps, the character you are writing, would go OOC, it's perfectly natural. It's in the process. Though I agree that the OP should have been a bit more nicer with his words and how he expressed himself and his critics.

Seriously though I’m still waiting for the similar works Please I cant seem to find good novels these days

El autor disfruta humillando y torturando al MC de maneras diferentes