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InNeedOfNameLv41yrInNeedOfName

The story itself is fine and the general quality is above the average. The main problem comes from the fact that it's written in slang as if it was a 12 yr old.

I'm in Hyrule? - A Zelda Fanfic.

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Mctoasty_Jr作者Mctoasty_Jr

Thank you for the genuine review! I did not expect my first fic to be read by anyone, so didn’t take it very seriously at the start. Doing some revisions, hope you’ll be back soon!