I like the writing quality. It has short chapters but that can be pass because of the regular update. Though, improvements are welcomed. I don't like the personality of this Naruto. He is a bit too much of a good guy. I would like him to be a little colder. Not that I dislike good guys. But this Naruto is a bit too much in my opinion. Apart from the future Naruto plot I don't like other plot that this story have. If you are going to make this realist then make it from the start. Like the very beginning. I don't know about you but no one absolutely no one is able to smile like Naruto in real life after going through what he has. Characters are a bit confusing too. It's a bit difficult to grasp the personality to characters. I like Hinata and I haven't found F Naruto talking about her to P Naruto at all. Why waste his love for her. I am not complaining about training her as that would be stupid. I am saying why love her? Anyway, it's just my opinion. Overall, it's average. Not good or bad. I hope the author will write better story in the future!
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