Review Detail of KM_Mad_Man in The Extra villain

Well, the storyline is good, but I think as another author, the story is progressing quite fast, which most of the readers don't like. I think you should consider the storyline a little, and increase the details. Like in the second chapter when the MC, got that fruit, it would be better if the journey was a little bit more detailed. By the way, a good story, I appreciate your work.