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Junni_MC
Junni_MCAuthor1yr
2023-07-02 09:15

Since most authors rate their novels with 5 stars, I will follow your example and do the same. Also, I would be very grateful if you could leave constructive criticism about my novel, such as. - If my grammar needs improvement - The structure is a mess Anything that makes me strive to be a better author is desirable, as I continually seek to improve myself and the story as I write

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abcd_rock
abcd_rockLv2

Is this transmigration... i mean the first few chapters were like as if he got teleported into some kind of trial/tutorial... and that got me confused. Can u pls clarify.... like after the trial does he get transmigrated or not. So that i can read ur work without resistance and with peace of mind...

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Junni_MC
Junni_MCAuthor

is transmigration. how the angel explains that his life on earth is over. that means that everyone present has died by being struck by the ray of light.

abcd_rock:Is this transmigration... i mean the first few chapters were like as if he got teleported into some kind of trial/tutorial... and that got me confused. Can u pls clarify.... like after the trial does he get transmigrated or not. So that i can read ur work without resistance and with peace of mind...
1yr
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Junni_MC
Junni_MCAuthor

For the moment I recommend that you do not read it because I am editing and rewriting some parts and it may seem that some things do not add up.

abcd_rock:Is this transmigration... i mean the first few chapters were like as if he got teleported into some kind of trial/tutorial... and that got me confused. Can u pls clarify.... like after the trial does he get transmigrated or not. So that i can read ur work without resistance and with peace of mind...
1yr
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

When are you releasing new chapters?

Junni_MC:For the moment I recommend that you do not read it because I am editing and rewriting some parts and it may seem that some things do not add up.
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Junni_MC
Junni_MCAuthor

I think in 15 days at the most or it may be less depending on how long it takes me to edit and rewrite the chapters since I am currently on chapter seven.

Romance_guy:When are you releasing new chapters?
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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

harem?? hope not

1yr
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Junni_MC
Junni_MCAuthor

there is no

Azathoth2:harem?? hope not
1yr
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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

is he gonna end up with only 1 girl or is he gonna get more than one ????? I ask because most author think that harem is 3 or more

Junni_MC:there is no
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Junni_MC
Junni_MCAuthor

he will only have one woman, because more than one is already a harem.

Ashborn1609:is he gonna end up with only 1 girl or is he gonna get more than one ????? I ask because most author think that harem is 3 or more
1yr
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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

time to read it before the bed then

Junni_MC:he will only have one woman, because more than one is already a harem.
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Started the first chapter not even half way into it and i loved it. i love how you actually care about the grammar and spelling of your story. love that you give details to feed the character’s imagination. keep it up!

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