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ChaosVoid666
ChaosVoid666Lv44mth
2024-06-26 18:02

I have read the Author's previous work and expected something similar or better but this is relatively mediocre in my opinion. MC becomes full simp despite saying he won't do all that then acts as if he is in some rom-com where when he 'catches a glimpse of Claire (Female Lead?)' he freezes, the world slows down and roses start blooming and rainbows... You get the point. I stopped reading after the chapters got too lovey-dovey and IQ-reducing decisions kept being made (MC knows showcasing or using his powers while witnesses watch is dangerous and could get him hunted but does it anyway).

Ascending To Infinity

KingSeyer
4.2
68 Chs

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I_am_Silent
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I have used my unfathomable Precognition abilities to peek into the future. This novel gains Sentience and only those who give 5 stars shall get a place in its new paradise.

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DaoistbEFoXv
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it so good the writing the character development not like those other protagonist that are way to dumb or way to delusional its very good can't wait to find out his powers

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Rebel_Rebel_2784
Rebel_Rebel_2784Lv3

love this so such but author why aren't you making any new chapter are you alright you said you contacted a malaria I'm worried please update your condition

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Godymandias
GodymandiasLv4

WQ: 4 - Every now and then there are missing words or sentences that don't make sense but apart from that it's fine. SD: 4 - It's fine but I'm getting bored of random drama. CD: 3 - Main character is a Simp, what more do you need to hear. US: 4 - Its fine. WB: 4 - It's fine.

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Gd_Sys
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moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

I cannot believe this was written by the same author who wrote Virgil. This story started out strong but the way MC went about claire and brody situation was cringy af. I mean as much as i love an anti hero, i wont have minded him helping out her in that situation but the way he went about it was full on emo teen drama cliche was cringy af. He could've solve the problem a thousand way but he choose the most silliest with the most drama. Also, his unwavering loyalty toward her (while claming otherwise like a macho alpha bro) for a friendship they have for a couple of days and his willingness to put himself in harm to satisfy her vanity was nauseating.

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PRIMAL_OUTER_CHAOS
PRIMAL_OUTER_CHAOSLv13

5 star novel and don't dorp it ⭐⭐⭐. .. .... . .

1yr
DaoistElxnbZ
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Any chance to write this again .............................................................................................................................?

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EUGENE_OBIEZE
EUGENE_OBIEZELv4

Well, overall, great book. Would have been cool if you can continue writing. What happened?

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