I think this story has a lot of potential; You can tell the author worked very hard on his/her work. The setting of the story, as well as the characters and the plot, are all very well thought and written! The writing quality is amazing! Although, it still needs some improvement, the author gets his/her point across to the reader. I feel as if the author should use more meaningful adjectives to describe scenes throughout the story. So that's why I rated writing quality 4 stars out of 5. The updating stability is very frequent for a busy author like this one! So it's an easy 5 stars of out 5. The story development is well thought out and carefully written for the most part. The author really broadened his/her horizons with this story. He/she also allowed the reader(s) to connect with the characters of the story, feeling the same emotions as the main character and other characters as well! So 5 stars again! The character design is thoroughly planned! Yes, there may not be any art other than the front page of the story, but character design is mainly about the personalities of every individual character! The author's work on the personality and emotions of each character is splendid and nearly perfect! So 5 stars as well! Last of all, world background is amazing and productive! This gives readers the knowledge of the world this story resides in and how their common sense works. There are many memorable places described throughout each chapter. So 5 stars out of 5 again. If I were to recommend this to a friend, a family member, or someone else. I would definitely suggest this to them with a positive response! This story is one of its kind and is very impactful to the reader(s). I hope you continue your works FIRE_ANGEL. You will surely succeed as an author and as a person if you continue your works! I'm sure just about anyone will agree with me! Good luck!
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thank you for your kind review and also for helping me to improve my writing skill.
