Review Detail of Fujiashi in Bounded With The Devil

Honestly the first chapter is a little dull for me and there are some minor grammatical errors too. The description of how her father killed her mother wasn't terrifying enough and I don't know but it feels like it happened too fast. But I gave it another try and read the second chapter, and that's where it went great. The description of how Arabelle escaped is really nice. I'll still give it 4 stars for the writing quality cuz of the errors but it's good!!! Good job (⁠ㆁ⁠ω⁠ㆁ⁠)