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2023-04-10 10:43

Very well developed idea, with pretty believable dialogue, the only issue is on some of the tenses, but other than that it's a fabulous piece of developing fiction.

Curiosity Killed The Cat

Meri_F
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Thanks! I'll reupdate the better version later :)

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somi_n
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I found this book through Reddit and I'm glad I clicked on the link. I am enjoying it so far. Keep writing author!

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hampat
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The protagonist's passion for theology and her curiosity make her a relatable and sympathetic character, and the danger and malevolent force lurking in the shadows add a sense of urgency and suspense to the plot. Waiting for more chapters!

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Found this book accidently on the new novel list and i love this already! Hope the author continue to write though! Can't hardly wait for the next chapter!

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