Review Detail of DaoistXhuIcQ in Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

Not the best, but a long way from the worst, of the HP fics I've seen. MC is interesting and there are a few interesting divergences from the well known canon. A few plot holes, but nothing that would break the story. I'm looking forward to the way the MC grows in this lifetime, and hopefully we see some other interesting odds and ends from someone who isn't there to pander to the golden trio or be an outright villian