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2023-04-16 12:29

I like how you have written your character and at the same time hate it. He, being a reincarnator, should have high spiritual energy. Also, he should have all chakra types due to having the karma mark, especially since it was given to him by the otsuski God. Also, the fact that he is a genius yet can not recognize it would make sense if he were a regular child, but as person who has 30 years of life experience he would be able to tell the difference between his new body and thought process compared to his older body. the only way this all makes sense is that his memories were fragmented to pieces, and he only knows the bare minimum of the Naruto plot, which is not the case with him only having blurred memories.

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