Drama from the beginning, this is perfect fans who love this sort of dark edgy and conflicting sorta romance. I thought it was well written and it captivates me from the start. This author has a lot to show for such few chapters. Keep up the good work!

Your synopsis is eye-catching. I just love the way the father of the child stood his ground. But it was quite unfair why Liezel took his sperm without notice. Awesome book

I like romance!. Everyone has their own different personality and their motivations. This was overall a well written story. I like how the dialogue too it was not awkward with the structure by structure. Good job author

This novel has an intriguing beginning with a tense encounter between two former lovers, Liezel and Light, which takes a disturbing turn when Liezel confesses to stealing Light's sperm to conceive their child. As the power dynamic shifts between them, the story explores themes such as trust, control, and obsession. We see Liezel, an asexual woman, seek the help of her friend Shaina to find a suitable man to father her child. The story questions the social constructs of heteronormative relationships and the pressure to conform to societal norms, as well as the search for meaning and connection in an increasingly disconnected world. The fact that Liezel, who identifies as asexual, experiences pleasure for the first time is also a significant aspect of the story. When she tells her doctor friend that she wants to undergo artificial insemination to conceive her child, she shocks her friend by revealing that she stole the sperm of a man from a bar without his knowledge or consent. The narrative explores Liezel's desperation to have a child, but also raises questions about the morality of her actions. In summary, the novel is an intriguing exploration of themes such as power, trust, obsession, sexual identity, and social norms, through a story that may challenge some readers due to its explicit content. The author demonstrates skill in addressing these complex themes in a subtle and captivating manner, making the story engaging and thought-provoking.

This novella is awesome with amazing characters plus it's way beyond my imagination of romance the author sure is taking romance novels to the next level.Keep it up cuz I want more.

Love the story, quality characters, though you are to question a lot of the MC's decisions morally but it makes me like the story more, having complex characters. Awesome story overall.

The story is quite nice. I love it. This romance story is differe from what I normally read. I love the characters.

This novel presents a unique take on love and relationships with its strong, independent protagonist who defies the norms of romance. The combination of her journey through parenthood and the supernatural elements introduced by the devilish love interest adds a layer of intrigue to the story. It would be interesting to see how the protagonist's beliefs and perspectives on love evolve as she navigates the challenges that come with her unconventional family

I can't help but praise the authenticity of your selected theme... though it is but questionable... I won't mind your ideas. The writing quality is not bad but there are possible improvements. I'd suggest adding more actions in between dialog lines, to make it all more dynamic. Other than that, the only thing that didn't resonate at all with me was the character introduction... or rather its absence. I found it quite hard to follow the dialogue not knowing a thing about the characters, though the relationship between them was quite clear.