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Review Detail of Zuchiku in Breaking Into Your Heart

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Zuchiku
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A unique start for the couple involved with topics that could be sensitive for some readers.Nontheless it's a sweet love story that made my heart melt, my emotions followed the characters and the story has an ending i did not expect but such is live. (Hoping for a sequal)The characters are very well displayed.There actions are believable so that i was focused on the story rather than questioning theire actions.Not fully 5 stars for some writing mistakes, as in typos and a mix up between his/her and so on. Also when it comes to world backrounds, i'm not a big fan of nameless cities or schoolnames. I can understand that it's easier that way and makes it more up to the reader where things are placed.I know i'm being picky with the downrating for such minor details and it didn't stop me from enjoying the story at all 🥰

Breaking Into Your Heart

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XanaTrygg
XanaTrygg作者XanaTrygg

I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story! My idea was to portray real people in real life situations. People that others can feel related to and accompany them throughout their story!I really appreciate an honest review! And those are some valid comments to me! I'll have to re read the chapters to fix those typos! Next time I'll think seriously about naming the places hahaha as you said, I thought the place was not important for what I really wanted to say! Again, I appreciate your thoughts on my story ✨💗💖