Review Detail of Fifth_Daoist in Peerless Sect Master
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Hello Readers! I'm Fifth_Daoist, the author of this story, presenting his obligatory 5-Stars Review!!! Well jokes aside. Peerless Sect Master is a story I wrote to let's say, train. Due to the lack of outline will be no grand overarching plot, just the step by step rise of the Profound Heaven Sect led by Yu Weiyuan! And I believe that's fine as well. I think I did a good job on characterization, making each characters have their own quirks, goals and mindset. I'm not a native speaker, meaning sometimes you'll perhaps find me lacking in vocabulary, but I'm sure my writing is still up to par. You can see for yourself. As for the story itself, it is my own take on the Xianxia genre. And since I'm writing this story dor training purpose, it'll stay quite orthodox, while not indulging too much in the poisonous tropes like face slapping young masters. I hope you'll enjoy my story and give me advice as we go, so we can make this story and the following one even better together with the power of friendship!! : )
Peerless Sect Master
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I want to read this, but I need to know if the romance will start early or in the middle of the story, and. I know this is a chinese novel, but can you cut down with the face slapping it's really boring now, and don't let female get forced into a stronger sect. Let her train with MC. There's no need to let her get taken away for so many chapters that people will forget about her, and please don't let Mc hide his strength it's in every single novel where the Mc hides himself let him be a show off if he has the the to do so.
I can tell you. The romance should begin relatively early, within the first thirty chapters. There will be no forced separation (I hate these plots too), the heroine will become the Sect Madam and cultivate with our Main Character, going through trials and tribulations with him. Yu Weiyuan, the main character, always takes care to hide a few trump cards, but he never hides his strength. If he can cross realms to fight, he will. I hope if you'll like my story!
RyuSenju:I want to read this, but I need to know if the romance will start early or in the middle of the story, and. I know this is a chinese novel, but can you cut down with the face slapping it's really boring now, and don't let female get forced into a stronger sect. Let her train with MC. There's no need to let her get taken away for so many chapters that people will forget about her, and please don't let Mc hide his strength it's in every single novel where the Mc hides himself let him be a show off if he has the the to do so.
Oh and I don't like to be too heavy on face-slapping. How can young masters cultivated as heirs to major powers be really so idiotic, after all?
RyuSenju:I want to read this, but I need to know if the romance will start early or in the middle of the story, and. I know this is a chinese novel, but can you cut down with the face slapping it's really boring now, and don't let female get forced into a stronger sect. Let her train with MC. There's no need to let her get taken away for so many chapters that people will forget about her, and please don't let Mc hide his strength it's in every single novel where the Mc hides himself let him be a show off if he has the the to do so.
Fifth_Daoist:I can tell you. The romance should begin relatively early, within the first thirty chapters. There will be no forced separation (I hate these plots too), the heroine will become the Sect Madam and cultivate with our Main Character, going through trials and tribulations with him. Yu Weiyuan, the main character, always takes care to hide a few trump cards, but he never hides his strength. If he can cross realms to fight, he will. I hope if you'll like my story!
Fifth_Daoist:Oh and I don't like to be too heavy on face-slapping. How can young masters cultivated as heirs to major powers be really so idiotic, after all?