(Ch37) The story is really entertaining and there’s nothing huge that’s wrong with it. The translation is a bit on the rough side making it a bit hard to understand but that’s really the only problem with the story. I would have read more if there where more chapters. Also the author is lowkey kinda racist. In chapter 29 the mc says the only thing wrong with yoruichi is thats she’s black. So yeah, I’m still going to read this because this is really the only time it’s mentioned so far. but still, it’s kinda wild it’s said at all.

This is a pretty fun one, the quality of the translation is fine, no major issues so far so it is pretty easy reading. The story itself is fun, the MC is inserted into the story long before the events of the show so we get to see the MC develop over a period of time, rather than a rush job so he can hang with the gaang. The fact that we get to see more of the story side of what was the shows main boogymen is nice too. As of chapter 51, I would recommend this.

This such an amazing translation, hopefully the author can keep uploading lots of chapters onto here. I seen his other translation stories but no nothing can beat this one.

Well let me be the first to rate the book XD

the story is nice but if you don't add more chapters or drop it the nothing can happen but if you complete the fanfiction like 150 to 200 chapter's it can become famous in fanfic section 👍☺️

This is an amazing fanfic i can not praise it enough. I got so hooked that i hav to read the MTL to finish it as i loved it to much. I my opinion it has it all, some action, slice of life, cunningness, a little romance but not at all a focus for the author. The Arcs are just the right length, never thought one of the Arcs was boring or to long. I can only highly recommend it please give it a read

for a chinese to english translation its pretty good (for a edited MTL, its still pretty bad overall). my problems with the novel come from the story development.. once again, aizen is a prominent figure, its honestly too boring. basically every bleach fic is just the mc either following or stressing about aizen nonstop. i kinda wish someone would write an AU without aizen and write some OCs or something, maybe make the hollows much more powerful in an AU so that the enemy dosent need to be fking aizen..

It’s too boring, started with interesting premise yet we have all this. Mc’s character is nothing remarkable , I don’t feel involved in the story. His powers are unexplained, at least try to make power levels classification with examples. Mc doesn’t differ much from nps as any other characters in this novel, his interactions with Aizen are completely ridiculous.

Probably the best transition out there, like its very good for its work. I wish the author/translator does other stories because wow

This story is good and all but something just doesn't sit right with me because MC is right straight by thinking that Yoruichi is black and said it the same with the light off. I'm hurt by this so I decide to drop it just because of that. With that, I conclude my review