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2023-05-12 11:14

Excellent writing! I love the direction of the plot so far - I hope you continue with this work. Write for those of us who love the story "as is"! To me, a writer loses their creativity and control of their work when they try to fix what the negative comments say is wrong i.e. writing for those who want to change it. I hope I didn't "overstep" in my comments but I noticed low ratings that I didn't understand the "why". All online writers have my utmost respect because they have the courage to write and let the world read it!!

GOT: A New Path - A New Song

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