Review Detail of Bierbart in GOT: A New Path - A New Song

its rather well written languagewise. some minor formating errors here and there. Story development in the early chapters has mostly drama, angst and planning. pretty much also extra oc since its a mixture of souls and original character got influenced from jon and got much emotional baggage with it. preset of the story seems interesting but the logic is kinda bad honestly especially with the tagaryen restoration... sorry to say but if thats a priority for him single wife and LI is stupid with a male lead. Since he can have more children that way and repopulate the bloodline better. Ok with Dany but he kinda has to get to her before drogo... kinda screwed herself there with getting pregnant and loosing the ability to have children soo no more tagaryens as single ppartner hich cant have children kinda screwss that hard. the revenge part is still possible though.